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Easier Said Than Done : When PC Equals BS

If your organization is fighting an ugly enemy, don’t make it harder to fight by being too squeamish to talk about it.

April 2009 By Jeff Brooks
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As you can probably imagine, getting people to rally around the cause of saving people from Hansen’s disease was a bit rough.

Leprosy is an ugly word, with an ancient and ugly history. “Leper” is even worse. It hardly even means someone who has contracted leprosy anymore; the secondary meaning of a detestable person who should be avoided has pretty much taken over.

I almost can’t blame the professionals who shrink from throwing around such ugly words. But let’s be realistic: Hardly anyone outside the medical community has a clue what Hansen’s disease is. And nearly everyone at least has some idea what leprosy is — and that it’s a horrendous affliction anyone would be happy to see removed from the face of the earth.

A lot of nonprofits struggle with this issue, seeking colorless, uncontroversial, low-impact ways of describing the issues they’re involved with.

When they mandate that kind of language in their fundraising, they’re choosing to motivate fewer donors, raise less revenue and do less good. And that, as far as I’m concerned, is way too high a price for being able to feel good about the way you talk. To put it bluntly: How many people have leprosy right now because we couldn’t bring ourselves to say “leprosy”?

Overly sensitive?
What makes us think that way? I might have figured it out a while ago when I saw a strange list labeled “Sensitivities.” Published by a health charity, it was a list of forbidden ways of talking about “their” disease. The committee that created the list clearly wanted to maintain tight control over discourse about it.

Its motivation was a lot like that of the folks at the leprosy organization, but more so because the people who will read its material are not just involved in the cause of fighting the disease — many of them actually have the disease.

You don’t want to insult, marginalize or be oafish toward the people you serve. Especially when they’re also your donors. The problem is, nearly every term on that sensitivities list was an ordinary, colloquial way of describing the disease and its symptoms. The alternatives given were mostly convoluted constructions that virtually defined the disease out of existence.

If you stuck to that list, you could have an entire conversation about that disease without ever naming it directly, mentioning that having the disease is undesirable or noting that fighting it is a struggle.

That kind of leaves you high and dry when it comes to issuing battle cries for fighting the disease. And the kicker is, hardly anybody — especially anyone 60 and older — would take offense at the forbidden terms.

Whose “sensitivities” were the list makers protecting? I doubt they fully realize it, but they’re worried about the fine-tuned sensitivities of prissy 29-year-olds who were reared on diets of self-esteem and political correctness — that is, their own employees. Wrong audience. Most donors are mature adults who’ve been through some of life’s battering. They aren’t sensitive flowers that will wilt at the sound of an undisguised naming of something unpleasant. Let the sensitive nonprofit staffers adjust to that reality. They’ll get over the shock.

Of course, nobody should be an insensitive jerk. But don’t muffle your meaning with layers of avoidance. That’s just rude to the people you’re trying to communicate with. And it always makes for less effective fundraising. FS

Jeff Brooks is creative director at Merkle and keeper of the Donor Power Blog. Reach him at jbrooks@merkleinc.com 


 

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Rebecca - Posted on April 21, 2009
I appreciated this article and, as you can imagine, it stirred up an old conversation. In creating our Mission, our group struggled with the use of the word "poor".

When the people you are serving wouldn't refer to themselves with the same terms you are, or would be offended by it, then it would seem that a more appropriate term is necessary. Unlike a medical condition, our terminology was also argued based on relativity. For instance, poor in relationship to what standard?

All that to say that this article is making me ponder and I was hoping for input.

We ended up going a different direction with our mission but as we build out our business plan, the insight would be helpful.

Thanks!
Jason Lewis - Posted on April 18, 2009
I once raised major gifts for a national health charity and I remember the situations wherein people would not use particular language for fear of being offensive or distasteful. As a person who also suffered from the same disease I was often taken back by those who could not "say the words" that may not have been PC but certainly were motivating and a call to action.
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Rebecca - Posted on April 21, 2009
I appreciated this article and, as you can imagine, it stirred up an old conversation. In creating our Mission, our group struggled with the use of the word "poor".

When the people you are serving wouldn't refer to themselves with the same terms you are, or would be offended by it, then it would seem that a more appropriate term is necessary. Unlike a medical condition, our terminology was also argued based on relativity. For instance, poor in relationship to what standard?

All that to say that this article is making me ponder and I was hoping for input.

We ended up going a different direction with our mission but as we build out our business plan, the insight would be helpful.

Thanks!
Jason Lewis - Posted on April 18, 2009
I once raised major gifts for a national health charity and I remember the situations wherein people would not use particular language for fear of being offensive or distasteful. As a person who also suffered from the same disease I was often taken back by those who could not "say the words" that may not have been PC but certainly were motivating and a call to action.